The Suffering

[Gabriel]

Tässä sitten runo, jonka on tarkoitus kuvata enemmän tai vähemmän kärsimystä. Ei minusta kovin hyvä.

I have suffered way too much,
with madness I have been in touch,
in mental genocide glorious, such.
I have suffered way too much.

But I won't drop my own blood,
I shall keep that mine, my red flood,
my mind will as pillar strongly stand,
throwing it's deep shadow over land.

Through suffering have I become strong,
though during the process time seemed long,
I shall sing this brutal genoce song,
stop you can me only by ripping off my tongue.

Many times has my mind been drowning into sorrow,
strength from anyone ever I couldn't borrow,
on my very own weak feet have I stood,
and believe me, it didn't feel good.

I have shread too many tears,
during these very long years,
I have been standing against my fears,
and almost completely broken are all my gears.

Never ever have I had someone to speak,
times and times after; I have become weak,
losing every time of sorrow a bit of hope,
every time has become shorter the rope.

The time, I was almost completely broken,
during these long long times I haven't truly spoken,
I was alone then, not at all from nightmare awoken,
the heaviness almost crushed me, I got almost broken.

[Dagger]

Minusta tämä runo on ihan hyvä.. Voi olla hankalaa keksiä riimejä englanniksi, ja varsinkin sellaisia jotka sopisivat hyvin aiheeseen.. Tuollaista voisi laulaa tai hokea silloin kun oikein tuntuu pahalta. En nyt muuta osaa sanoa, tässä oli pari kohtaa joista pidin ja runo oli hyvin riimitetty. Sopii tällaiseen synkkään sadepäivään. Voisit ehkä tehdä toisen runon, joka toimisi vastapainona tälle.. Eli ilosta.