Lloope
27.6.2003, 15:07:52
Eli ajattelin, että tähän threadiin saa itse kukin pistää omia tarinoitaan ja sitten muut käyttäjät voivat arvioida niitä. Tässä omani, tämä on ainut minkä löysin tietokoneeltani, kun äidinkielen tunnin turinat pitää kirjoittaa käsin. Tämä on muuten englanninkielinen, kun englannissa oli tehtävänä kirjoittaa rakkaustarina englanniksi, noh, luulempa, että englanninkielen lukeminenkin sujuu (jos tämän nyt kukaan jaksaa lukea :) Kielioppivirheitäkin saattaa olla, koska en jaksanut kirjoittaa korjattua versiota koneelle enää :D
Jack who fell in love
Jack was a 29 year old police from the heart of New York city. He hadn’t ever arrested any big criminals, only few pickpockets and he was hard to believe, that he can someday do something important. Jack lived alone, but he had been looking for a girlfriend for a while and he was every weekend in Elmo’s corner pub drinking vodka martini, shaken, not stirred, but nobody weren’t interested in him, because he had a terrible voice and he often talked with his gun.
Once Jack was in his way to Honolulu for a holiday trip. He waited for a plane, when he saw something just beautiful. It was a girl, wonderful girl. “She could change all my life! I want to marry her!” Jack thought and fell in love immediately with the girl, but he didn’t know, that the girl wasn’t alone… She had a boyfriend; Young, handsome and very well-muscled. At last Jack heard the final announcement to the flight to Honolulu and he thought that he couldn’t ever beat that guy and just said “hey” to the girl he loved and walked to the plane. In the plane he sat next to the girl and just watched her all the time.
Suddenly Jack heard something from front of the plane. It was like… shooting? Then plane started to change it’s way and five about 30 year old men appeared in front of the plane from the cockpit. The tallest of them shot few rounds from his ak-47 in the roof of the plane and shouted: “we’ve taken over this plane. Our new course is Mother Russia, because we need this plane for our hydrogen bombs, because the situation in Russia is so bad that Russia’s government don’t have enough money for new planes! that’s so sad…” Then the woman who Jack loved suddenly rose up with his boyfriend and shouted: “I’m agent Lulu from FBI! Freeze!” Then Jack had a good feeling about this, when he noticed that the man who was with Lulu was just his partner in work.
One of the criminals dropped his gun and nearly started to cry. One of other criminals just laughed at Lulu and first shot her partner and then aimed at Lulu. Jack couldn’t stand that and tripped Lulu, so the bullet didn’t hit her. Then Jack took his desert eagle and ran behind benches. The leader of the criminals started to walk towards him slowly and laughed a bit. “You can’t hide. There’s four of us and we all have ak-47 and there’s only three of you with pistols…” he said. But then Jack did something very unexpected; he rushed to the other bench line and shot five times. One of the shots hit to leaders arm and he dropped his ak-47. He said something to his friends in Russian and the others started to shoot burst fire into the benches. Two civilians died, but the criminals seemed to forgot Lulu and his partner. Both of them took their pistols and shot two of the criminals. Only two and one without an arm were left.
The situation were growing more and more critical and the fight was about to growing. Lulu’s partner was shot in the leg and he was heavily bleeding. Lulu and Jack was now behind the same bench. Jack whispered quietly to lulu: “If we survive from that, would you come out with me? We could go to Elmo’s corner pub. Do you know that cool place?” “Sure I know it. I accept your offer.” When Jack heard these words he was happier than he have ever been. “Let’s kill some bastards and then go out with Lulu” he said to his gun. Lulu was wondering: “Who were you talking about?” “nobody” said Jack. Then they rose up and ran towards the criminals. Jack from left side from benches, Lulu from right. Jack shot a big hole to one of the criminals arm with his excellent aiming skill, but Lulu weren’t so good: she shot, but didn’t hit anything. Instead of that the only criminal who was in full strength unfortunately shot Lulu to left leg and Lulu fell in floor. Then Jack thought that they won’t survive from that situation alive.
The criminal started to walk towards Jack who was crying for Lulu behind benches again, when suddenly the lights went off. Two black suited men with gas masks ran to the passenger part of the plane. They both had MP5 as a gun and they shouted: “Here’s SWAT team! You’re terribly surrounded!” but they started to laugh when they noticed that there was only one criminal in full strength. They just cold blooded shot him and took off their gas masks. “you’re in save now, it’s your lucky that that FBI agent John Scully realized to call help and we arrived with a stealth fighter and landed onto the right wing of the plane and jumped to the cargo room - that place where they keep motorbikes and… sure you can think that it wasn’t easy! This plane is going to do an emergency landing on Paris just in a minutes.
The plane landed fine and an ambulance came to get Lulu and his partner and police took the invalid criminals to jail. When Lulu was lying on a litter, Jack was holding her hand and said: “I knew in my heart that we’ve made to be together. I will stay with you to rest of your life and you can believe that not even a wild tiger couldn’t keep us away from each other”
Jack waited till ambulance drivers took Lulu away and then he took his motorbike and drove till sunset thinking Lulu.
THE END
Ei häävi... Ehkä olis voinu kirjottaa kunnollisemmankin mutta se tulee sitte myöhemmin......
Jack who fell in love
Jack was a 29 year old police from the heart of New York city. He hadn’t ever arrested any big criminals, only few pickpockets and he was hard to believe, that he can someday do something important. Jack lived alone, but he had been looking for a girlfriend for a while and he was every weekend in Elmo’s corner pub drinking vodka martini, shaken, not stirred, but nobody weren’t interested in him, because he had a terrible voice and he often talked with his gun.
Once Jack was in his way to Honolulu for a holiday trip. He waited for a plane, when he saw something just beautiful. It was a girl, wonderful girl. “She could change all my life! I want to marry her!” Jack thought and fell in love immediately with the girl, but he didn’t know, that the girl wasn’t alone… She had a boyfriend; Young, handsome and very well-muscled. At last Jack heard the final announcement to the flight to Honolulu and he thought that he couldn’t ever beat that guy and just said “hey” to the girl he loved and walked to the plane. In the plane he sat next to the girl and just watched her all the time.
Suddenly Jack heard something from front of the plane. It was like… shooting? Then plane started to change it’s way and five about 30 year old men appeared in front of the plane from the cockpit. The tallest of them shot few rounds from his ak-47 in the roof of the plane and shouted: “we’ve taken over this plane. Our new course is Mother Russia, because we need this plane for our hydrogen bombs, because the situation in Russia is so bad that Russia’s government don’t have enough money for new planes! that’s so sad…” Then the woman who Jack loved suddenly rose up with his boyfriend and shouted: “I’m agent Lulu from FBI! Freeze!” Then Jack had a good feeling about this, when he noticed that the man who was with Lulu was just his partner in work.
One of the criminals dropped his gun and nearly started to cry. One of other criminals just laughed at Lulu and first shot her partner and then aimed at Lulu. Jack couldn’t stand that and tripped Lulu, so the bullet didn’t hit her. Then Jack took his desert eagle and ran behind benches. The leader of the criminals started to walk towards him slowly and laughed a bit. “You can’t hide. There’s four of us and we all have ak-47 and there’s only three of you with pistols…” he said. But then Jack did something very unexpected; he rushed to the other bench line and shot five times. One of the shots hit to leaders arm and he dropped his ak-47. He said something to his friends in Russian and the others started to shoot burst fire into the benches. Two civilians died, but the criminals seemed to forgot Lulu and his partner. Both of them took their pistols and shot two of the criminals. Only two and one without an arm were left.
The situation were growing more and more critical and the fight was about to growing. Lulu’s partner was shot in the leg and he was heavily bleeding. Lulu and Jack was now behind the same bench. Jack whispered quietly to lulu: “If we survive from that, would you come out with me? We could go to Elmo’s corner pub. Do you know that cool place?” “Sure I know it. I accept your offer.” When Jack heard these words he was happier than he have ever been. “Let’s kill some bastards and then go out with Lulu” he said to his gun. Lulu was wondering: “Who were you talking about?” “nobody” said Jack. Then they rose up and ran towards the criminals. Jack from left side from benches, Lulu from right. Jack shot a big hole to one of the criminals arm with his excellent aiming skill, but Lulu weren’t so good: she shot, but didn’t hit anything. Instead of that the only criminal who was in full strength unfortunately shot Lulu to left leg and Lulu fell in floor. Then Jack thought that they won’t survive from that situation alive.
The criminal started to walk towards Jack who was crying for Lulu behind benches again, when suddenly the lights went off. Two black suited men with gas masks ran to the passenger part of the plane. They both had MP5 as a gun and they shouted: “Here’s SWAT team! You’re terribly surrounded!” but they started to laugh when they noticed that there was only one criminal in full strength. They just cold blooded shot him and took off their gas masks. “you’re in save now, it’s your lucky that that FBI agent John Scully realized to call help and we arrived with a stealth fighter and landed onto the right wing of the plane and jumped to the cargo room - that place where they keep motorbikes and… sure you can think that it wasn’t easy! This plane is going to do an emergency landing on Paris just in a minutes.
The plane landed fine and an ambulance came to get Lulu and his partner and police took the invalid criminals to jail. When Lulu was lying on a litter, Jack was holding her hand and said: “I knew in my heart that we’ve made to be together. I will stay with you to rest of your life and you can believe that not even a wild tiger couldn’t keep us away from each other”
Jack waited till ambulance drivers took Lulu away and then he took his motorbike and drove till sunset thinking Lulu.
THE END
Ei häävi... Ehkä olis voinu kirjottaa kunnollisemmankin mutta se tulee sitte myöhemmin......