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The Real Rikku
6.6.2004, 20:04:03
Joo. Minun yksi tarina :yay: Englanniks tietty! Mitäs luulitte?
Siinä kiroillaan sitte ja se on aika pitkä... Miulla oli hauskaa kun kirjotin tätä...
Ja Misha on miun artistinimeni. No touchie :P Ja Nooj on sitte puu... :eh:

The most weirdest Big Brother story of all time!(Ei, ei ei ei. Ei se Rikkun veli)

Misha:*Snorts* Yeah, dude! I totally was sugar-high! Oh yeah. Who's good? Misha is.*Hiccup* I'm drunk off my ass… NOT REALLY, JES' HIGH OFFA SUGAR~~!!!! Vidina and Tidus bashing, with slight Wakka and Auron bashy-bashy too! Oh, and random deaths!

Pairings:
YuTi
RikkuGippal
PaineNooj
LeblancBaralai
OrLo(O_O')
WaLu
KimahriShoopuf
AuronSomeone
There ya have it!

~:~:~:~Chapter 1: Phear teh trippy ficcy!~:~:~:~

ScEnE: Besaid beach
Cast: FFX-2

Tidus:*Grins* I'm a blitzer!
Wakka: Me too, ya?
Aurochs: We too, ya?
Rikku: Seriously, I'm too!(Jumps up and down)
Gippal: Why did you sign me up for blitzball, Rikku?
Rikku:*Whispers to Gippal* 'Coz you look so damn cute in your blitz-uniform.
Gippal:*Blushes* (Turns away)
Tidus: AUROOOOCHS! PRACTISE!!!!! NOOOOOOW!!!!!!!!!!
Aurochs: YESSIR MA'AM SIR!(Snicker) Meg!
Tidus: -_-'
Yuna:*To Paine and Lulu* So Rikku's joined the Aurochs with Gippal?
Lulu: Yeah. I heard Wakka talked her into it.
Paine: I heard she and Gippal signed themselves freely in it…
Yuna:~sigh~I've always wanted to blitz… But now I'm pregnant… To a guy who just watches Lulu's pair of milkshakes!
Lulu(Is proud of her 'milkshakes')
Vidina: Gawgle!*Burps*
YLP: AWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vidina: o_o'
YLP: AWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vidina(Decides it's time to run away)
YLP(Grab him): AWWW!!!!!!!!!! Ya worthless piece of shit! DIE!(Throw Vidina into teh trippy ocean o.o')
Vidina: GAWGLE!(Drowns)
YLP: AWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(Jump on his corpse)

TEH TRIPPY BLITZ PRACTISE!

Tidus: NAMECALL! Rikku?
Rikku: HERE!
Tidus: Gippal?
Gippal: Unfortunately…
Tidus: Wakka, Letty, Jassu, Botta, Keepa?
Mentioned ppl: PRESENT, YA?
Tidus: MOVE CHECK! Rikku; Corckscrew Shot?
Rikku(Performs a succesful Corckscrew Shot)
Tidus: Gippal; Invicible shot?
Gippal(Performs Invicible shot)
Tidus: I pity the trippy foo'!
All: O_o;
Wakka(After a minute of silence): Ya…
Rikku: DULL! Can we, like, start?
Jassu(Tries his 'move' on Rikku): So… Wanna get busy under the fire?
Gippal(Tries to push Jassu away): Hey hey hey! Stupid blitzer, step away from lady Skylar.
Rikku(Puts hand on Gippal's shoulder): It's under control.*To Jassu* Jack off, b@st@rd.
Jassu: OUCH!(Dies) X_X![Misha- RANDOMNESS!(Cheers)]
All(Stare): O.o!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jassu: YA!?
Rikku: See?
Gippal: ^__________________*
Tidus: AWRIGHT! Let's put uniform's on!

Instead of teh trippyish uglish yellowish weirdish uniform's, they've got black and blue uniform's.

Gippal: Man, Rikku, oui yna rud!
Rikku: Same to you, hot stuff!*Winks*
Tidus: Sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooo… You got the hots for Rikku?
Gippal: You know I have.
Wakka: Want some 'love tips'?*Wink wink wink wink wink wink, wiggle wiggle*
Gippal: Nope. She'll do fine~.
Tidus: Well, we'll be here for ya, buddy.
Buddy(Appears): WUT? Want @$$?
Tidus: AHH! SEXUALLY MAD GAY MAN!
Then suddenly… BANG! And Buddy was no longer in the book of the living…
Gippal: Rikku Rikku Rikku… How many times've I told you NOT to play with LOADED machina guns before?(Pats Rikku's head)
Rikku(Holds a giant machina gun in her hands and grins): Sorry, daddy.
Gippal:*Whispers to her* Good girl. I'll give you a cookie later.
Tidus: Ah, the young L-O-V-E~~!
Wakka*Sighs girly*
Aurochs(Sing a cheesy love song)
Rikku: Hey, c'mon. We're not serious. We're friends, right Gippal?
Gippal: Oh yeah. Very good friends indeed.(Slaps Rikku's butt)
Rikku(Slaps Gippal): Whoops… Sorry, reflex.
Tidus: OY! OY! OY! O-Y!
Aurochs: WHAT?
Tidus(Farts)
Aurochs: EW!(Faint)

DA TRIPPY PRACTISE STARTS!

Tidus: Throw ball! Kick ball! Eat ball! Boss ball! Sit on ball! Uhh… Molest Ball…!
Rikku: HEY, YOU ARSE!
Tidus: PICK YER PARTNER AND PRACTISE!
Rikku: Gippy!!!!!!!!(Extends her hands)
Gippal: Cid's girl!!!!!!!(Extends his hands)
RG: WE'RE A PAIR!(Hug)
Tidus: Ah, the young L-O-V-E~~!
Wakka*Sighs girly*
Aurochs(Sing a cheesy love song)
Tidus: I PICK… LULU'S TITS!
Lulu: WTF?!
Wakka: WTF, YA!?*Sighs manly*
Aurochs(Sing a cheesy war theme)
Tidus: LET'S STARTS!
Clock(Rings)
Rikku: Aw… Our practise time's over already???????????????

~:~:~:~Chapter 2: TEH TRIPPY PICNIC!~:~:~:~

Yuna: FUG!
All:*GAASSSSSSSPPPPPPPP* Yuna!
Yuna: THE FUG?
Rikku: C'moooooooooooooooon, arses! Let's EAT!
Gippal(Puts his arm around Rikku's shoulder's)
Rikku(Grins)
YLP: AWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!(Kill Vidina by hanging him from a tree[Not Nooj!])
Rikku: Okay, let's avoid them…
Gippal:*Whispers to Rikku* Wanna get outta here?
Rikku:*Whispers back* You betcha!
R&G(Sneak away)
Yuna: Vidina's a damn mo'fo!
Lulu: Duh Ms. Obvious!
Paine: Hey nonny-nonny!(Cartwheels sluggishly and crashes into tree[Not Nooj])
Buddy: That had to hurt… o_o'
Paine:*Twitch* I want mah ciggies…*Twitch*
Maester Mika[Misha- Is there for no reason, I'm gonna kill 'im!]: Pwaize bee to Yevhon!(Sluggishly does gesture) (Tree[Not Nooj!] falls on him) (Dies)
Nooj(Gets pecked by nightingales): Ekk!
Vidina(Magically revives, only to be killed again)
YLP: AAAAAAAWWWWWW!!!!(Kill Vidina by burying him alive[Talk about scary])
Leblanc:*Hic* Ya know, loves…*Hic*
Baralai(Looks at her in disgust)
Paine(Starts snapping chickens necks[chickens…?])
Yuna: Paine, you shit for brains! We looks after the chickens, we do not kill them!
Paine: But…chickens make funny snap sounds!
Yuna(Backslaps)
Paine(Nudges)
Yuna(Left hooks)
Paine(Right straights)
Nooj(Is being pecked by… weasels…[we live in a weird world*Poses*])
Rikku(Returns): Wootness!
Suddenly, there is an evil earthquake that I caused(MWAHAHA!) and tears the place where they are off the mainland!
Gippal: Fuck, this blows!
Rikku: We're stranded!(Runs around) Ahh! Noooo! My pixie stix…(Wails)
They all, being stupid and not running back home whilst they could, are now stranded on an island!
Leblanc(Looks up): Duh Ms. Obvious!

So they(Rikku, Gip, Yuna, Paine, Dona, Leblanc, Nooj, Logos, Ormi, Baralai, Buddy, Brother, Lulu, Wakka, Vidina and Tobli. The others died…) are stranded on an isle with random killer chickens! But alas, like a miracle they find a strangely modern house(Big Bro hits!) and decide to live in it! To survive there, they recieve tasks and every two weeks one person is voted off the place and forced to get killed by the chickens!*Inhale* WILL they survive? WILL they know that there's a 9,999999,999999 gil reward? Check the following cred out if you want to find out!(Cred-> Shit)

Oh, yeah. Their nicknames:

Rikku= Cid's (little) girl
Gippal= The Gip or The Hawtness
Yuna= Yunie
Paine= Nonny-nonny or Goth bitch
Dona= HelpmeI'mignored!
Leblanc= Ms. Tit For Brains
Nooj= Treeman or just Tree
Logos= Twig
Ormi= Fatso or Fat Fuck
Baralai= Barry or Lidea(Cutie)
Buddy= Friendly Neighbourhood Mop
Brother= Incesting prick
Lulu= Loo-Roll or just Ms. Huge Rack
Wakka= Wanker or Dude With Weird Hair-do
Tobli= Obnoxious midget

Sorry to Leblanc, the writer! I'm a rip off! I ripped somethings off that were in your story! Don't sue me~!

Oh, and in case ya didn't know… I am… Sephiroth's mother… Naw, I'm Big Brother…(AN: It's weird, me being female and all O_o') If that solves the mystery of me treating Gippal, Rikku, Leblanc and Baralai differently…

Day 1: Nominations and plain weirdness

Narrator: It's been half an hour since the cast got stranded and found the house and they all[exept Buddy] are drunk.

Rikku: Hey yeah-yeah-yeah…*hic*

Tobli: (talking to wall) Sho I shaysh*hic* "You gotsh to find the pepper, yup-yup. Pepper ish vital, no-one existsh without it".

Wall: (being an inanimate object, doesn't answer)

Gippal: It's so W-E-I-R-D that*hic, vomit* there's an H-O-U-S-E in the M-I-D-D-L-E of an S-T-R-A-N-D-E-D island…*hic, vomit*

Big Brother: And now for the first nominations. Will Yuna get her chicken ass into the diary room?

Brother: Moose moose!*hic* Yuna is a moose!

Baralai: No moose!*vomit* (sips lager)

Brother: No moose? Aaaaww… ;_;

Yuna: (sluggishly walks to the diary room) Hewwo Big Bwothew!

Big Brother: Er, hello^___^ Yuna, who will you nominate?

Yuna: I nominate…*hic* Dona, 'cause she's just so freaking lesbian. And also… Brother. He said that I'm a-a MOOSE!(hysterical sob)

Bir Bro: Okay. (boots her out of the room)

Rikku(running around wildly): UWAOO~!

Gippal(tackles her)

Baralai(throws beer can)*hic*

Big Bro: Will (dodges beer can) will Lulu come to the diary room?

Lulu(goes, taking lager with her) *hic, vomits on the camera*

Big Bro: Hello Lulu. Who will you nominate?

Lulu: I nominate… Rikku, 'cause she's always flirting with Wakka!

Big Bro: I think she's not…

Lulu(looks out, sees Rikku getting tickled by Gippal): Whoops, er…my bad…

Big Bro: Anyone else you want to nominate?

Lulu: I nominate… Paine, she's a damn dominatrix bitch!(leaves, kicks wall)

Big Bro: Will Brother get his mambo arse into the diary room?

Brother(skips to diary room, destroying two lamps, knocking off a pan, making an earthquake in Zanarkand, sending five nuclear bombs off and killing wild squatter monkeys while doing so)

Big Bro: Brother, nominate two people.

Brother: I nominate all the lusting males because they're after Yuuunnnaaa!

Big Bro: Don't you shit for brains get it that she's your cousin?!

Brother: Cou-sin? Sin? YUNA IS SIN?! AWW!!! ;_;(gets thrown out)

Rikku(kicks)

Gippal(is sent flying to the sofa)

Rikku(attacks him)

Gippal(tickles Rikku)

Rikku: Hehehehehehe! Nooooooo*hic* NO STOP!(laughs drunkenly)

Dona(gets in a bitch slap war with Yuna)

Big Bro: Rikku to the diary room!

Rikku(dances drunkenly to the diary room)*vomit*

Big Bro: Who will you nominate?

Rikku: Uhh… Gippal, 'cuz of his eye patch and Brother for being a short sighted prick who tries to tickle me to hand over naked Yuna pics but hey, he's a damn asshole and he ain't gettin' better!(leaves, falls on floor and crawls to Gippal)

Baralai: Moose moose!*hic* Diary moose!

Brother: Asshole!(hits him) There ain't no mooses!*hic, vomit*

Baralai: Awwies!*hic* (sips lager)

Big Bro: Will Dona drag her large mambo ass into the diary room?

Dona(drunkenly walks to the diary room): Hewwo!

Big Bro: Who will you nominate?

Dona:*hic* Gee…*vomit* I nominate Rikku because bikinis and scarves do NOT match! They don't I tell you!*vomit* And Yuna for being an mother ****er! (leaves dancing)

Yuna: Hairl gel! ;_;

Paine: I want mah precioussssss hair gel-o!(reaches out)

Nooj(runs in with a rabid squirrel humping his ear)

Everyone(stares): O_O

Gippal(glares): Idiot!*hic*

Big Bro: Will Gippal get his sexy existence into the diary room?

Gippal(drunkenly walks/crawls into the diary room)

Big Bro: Who will you nominate?

Gippal: I nominate…*hic, vomit* Rikku, 'cause she's too hawt!*drool* And I nominate Brother for being a prick!(drunkenly runs out and hits wall)

Yuna: Moose Brother!(hits him with pillow)

Brother: Mah momma!*hic, vomit*

Big Bro: PAINE TO THE DIARY ROOM!

Paine(cartwheels into diary room)*hic*

Big Bro(sweet tone): Hewwo Paine.

Paine: Hewwo Big Bwudda!

Big Bro(still sweet tone): Paine?

Paine: Yef Big Bwothew?

Big Bro: Nominate two people!

Paine: I nominate Brother! Would you lust after your cousin?! So sick! Ewwiness!
And I nominate Ormi for being fat!(cartwheels out, runs over Logos)

Rikku: Mooses are EVIL! Evil I say!(raises fist)*vomits*

Everyone: O_o;

Big Bro: Leblanc to the diary room!

Leblanc(takes beer with her)

Big Bro: Hi Leblanc

Leblanc: Hello love

Big Bro: (giggles) She called me love!^_^ Who will you nominate?

Leblanc: I nominate… Brother! He's an incesting prick! And I'd also want to nominate Twig! I mean… Legos? Lobos? Pogos? Fukofs? It'll come to me soon…(leaves)*hic, vomit*

Nooj(has gotten rid of the squirrel)

Twig…er, Logos: Nooj is a tree!*hic, vomit*

Buddy: O_O Jeez!(mops up sick)

Big Bro: Noojster to the diary room!

Nooj(goes)

Big Bro: Hiya Noojie! Who will you shit for brains nominate?

Nooj: I nominate Brother! And Rikku! The Al Bheds must go!(leaves)

Lulu: WAS MY MOM PREGNANT BEFORE SHE GOT ME!?

Nooj: I'm a goody goody and I'm goin' to bed!(goes)

Gippal: WITH WHOOOOOOOO?

Big Bro: Will Twig…er, Logos get to the diary room, please?

Logos(slurs something, walks to diary room)

Big Bro: Hiya ass! Nominate two people

Logos: I NOMINATES EVERY MALE!*hic, vomit*(slurs, walks out)

Leblanc: Mooses! Eekk!*vomit*(slurs words)

Brother: And I says, "Gullwings!"(hops on table and makes flapping moves)

Rikku: After I declare mooses evil, you shan't go NEAR them!

Everyone(looks at a moose on the yard)

Moose: Moo[Or whatever mooses say]

Everyone: O_o'(back away)

Gippal(drunkenly): #Go fetch me a bottle of rum! Hey ho hey ho…#

Rikku: There's a giant moose oooooon the premises…kill it O_o Kill it for the sake of poor people it's eaten!(chases it with random twig)

Big Bro: Ormi to the diary room! Ormi to the diary room! Ormi to the diary room! Ormi to the diary room!

Ormi(goes into the diary room)

Big Bro: Who will you nominate?

Ormi: I nominates… Nooj the Tree! Trees are evil!*hic, vomit* And also… Yuna! No, wait… Paine!(leaves and does a dance)

Lulu(hangs Vidina) (whistles innocently and blames Yuna)

Dona: Flap damn you!(kicks)

Chicken(fears her and thus, flaps): >_>

Everyone: (tunelessly singing) #Don't blame…it on the sunshiiiiiine… Don't blame…it on the good tiiiimes…#

Tobli: *hic*#Blame it on Tree!#*hic, vomit*

Nooj(pissed out): I AIN'T NO TREE! *_*

Yuna:*hic, vomit* Sure ya are! Ya're teh biggest Twee awive!

Rikku: w00t!

Dona(is ignored)

Big Bro: Baralai will you drag your cuteness in here?

Baralai(slurs, goes into diary room)

Gippal(throws beer can at him): Bitching kinky ass!*vomits*

Baralai(is hit): Owies… ;_;

Big Bro: Who will you nominate?

Baralai: I nominate… Lulu and Wakka!(leaves, falls on floor)

Paine: Nonny?(cartwheels over poor Baralai) Funnay!(does same 45 times)

Baralai(is like pancake)

Gippal: Yeah, I know I'm sexy… ~_~(slurs)

Rikku: O_o Yepperdoodles!

Yuna and Lulu(drown Vidina in the toilet)

Paine: Don't hog all teh fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuun…!

Big Bro: Will Buddy come to the diary room?

Buddy(goes)

Big Bro: Hi Buddy. You know, I've been looking at the behavior of the lot of you and I've seen that you've been acting…nicely

Buddy: ^___^ Thanks. My mama will be proud!

Big Bro: Well, anyhoo…nominate two of the people

Buddy: Gee… I think I'll nominate… Leblanc, her dress is just too revealing! And then I'll nominate… Tobli for no apparent reason(leaves)

Rikku(falls on floor, slurs words)

Gippal(sleeptalks): Hey, soft hiney… We are so…planting…shoopuf shit on…Baralai's house…eh, eh?*vomits* You're looking so hawt…!(reaches out)

Leblanc: O_o! You twat!(slaps him) Don't grope my hiney!*hic*

Yuna: #Oh baby baby… Why'd ya leave me…?#(slurs)

Logos: Good God! An empty beer can! Preposterous!

Ormi: I'm tweakin' outs!(drinks beer) Yay! I am so gay!

Leblanc*hic*

Yuna: #I am sooooooo*hic* haaaaaaaaaaawt…#

Brother: YUNA!(reaches out)

Yuna: O_o Umm…(runs for dear life)

Brother: Yuuuuunnnnnaaaaa~! Mah Yuna~!

Everyone: Shit for brains Brother, she's your C-O-U-S-I-N!

Brother:… Me no geddit…(chases after Yuna)

Nooj: Alas, 'tis hopeless!

Paine(empty stare): You moron(throws can at him)

Nooj(is hit by can): ;_;

Yuna and Brother run past them.

Yuna: Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeelp!!!! Pweez?

Brother: Yuuunnnaaa~!(drools)

Gippal(slurs words, reaches out)

Rikku: Eek!(backslaps him) No groping! O_o

Big Bro: Will, uh… Will Wanker-Wakka come to the diary room?

Wakka(slurring, goes to the room)

Big Bro: Hello Wakka…

Wakka*vomits*: Hi, ya?

Big Bro: Who will…you…nominate…?

Wakka: I nominate… Gippal…because of…his hair…*hic* It's EVIL! Evil I tell ya!

Big Bro: So? His hair happens to be very sexy

Wakka: And…(slurs words)… Nooj…(leaves/crawls)

Lulu: Kaimkaze nazis!*hic*(hallucinates Wakka naked)

Paine: w00tness… Rmwahahahahaha!

Yuna and Brother run past again

Dona: Everybody! Hmph! Ignores ME!

Rikku: #Blame Yunieee…*hic* Blame the Treeeeeee…*vomits* Blaaaaaaaaame…meeeee…# (slurs)

Yuna(jumps on Buddy): Protect me!

Brother: Hmph. The fags get the chicks!

Big Bro: Tobli to the diary room?

Tobli: Yepper yesh, I gotsh to go!*hic* C-c-c-c-cheerios!(runs)

Big Bro: Hello stupid Tobli. Who will you nominate?

Tobli: I nominatesh…*vomits on camera* Gippal. Hish hair ish enough to get me jealoush! Yepper yesh yesh! And I nominate… Lulu becaushe she hash a big rack! Yeppidy yep-yep!(slurs words, is poked with random twig)

Rikku(poking people with random twigs)

Yuna: Brother! You incest! I hate yoo!*hic, vomit*

Buddy: Another job for me!(mops up sick)

Leblanc: Lager is soooo…*hic* Addictive…(maniacal giggle)

Dona(goes off to sleep)

~~~~~:::::~~~~~

And that ends day one! They all went to their beds and sleeped through the night.


Chapter two: The first nominees!


Narrator: It is morning in the Big Bro house. Rikku, Gippal, Yuna, Paine, Baralai and Nooj are awake, discussing non-vital stuff in the living room.

:::: 11.47 a.m ::::

Rikku(in yellow tops and loose white pants for jammies): But seriously…

Gippal(in loose T-shirt and shorts): So what? I've hangover, don't pressure me!

Baralai(in white T-shirt and boxers)(holds head): Oh…I am never, ever drinking again…

Yuna(in pink pyjamas): I'm so tired…

Paine(in black tops and blue shorts for jammies): Nonny…?

Nooj(in red pyjamas that have pink hearts): I'm hungry…

Rikku: I think we should eat cheese!

Gippal:*gasp* NO! Not CHEESE!

Yuna: Cheezy balls… Mmm…

Paine: Nooj why do you have something white in your hair?

Nooj: That damn squirrel raped me when I was sleeping! No!

Everyone: O_o

Nooj: What? It's not like I could control the forces of nature!

Everyone(back away)

Nooj: ;_; I feel ignored…

Leblanc(in red nightie): What's with the noise loves? People have hangover! They wanna sleep!

Dona(in slutty black nightie): IGNORANCE IS BLISS!

Everyone: O_O

Dona: What? It is

Rikku: It wasn't THAT…

Gippal(points at Dona)

Baralai(hysterical laughter)

Yuna: Good GOD!

Paine: N-nonny!?

Nooj: Bwhahahahahaha!

Dona: What? O_o

Rikku: A squirrel is humping Dona's ear! AHH!

Gippal(screams)

Rikku: Fuck off Dona! We do not want to be humped by animals!(raises random twig)

Yuna(squeals): Eee…someone, help us…

Rikku(hits Dona with twig)

Dona: X_x

Gippal: w00t!

Buddy: SHUT THE HELL UP!

Wakka: I HAVE HANGOVER, YA?! LEMME SLEEP!

Baralai: Random twigs attack!

Twigs(hit Dona): O_o

Dona: Owies! ;_;

Rikku: Mwhahahahahahaha! Twig power!(high fives Baralai and Gippal)

Gippal(hits Dona with pillow)

Baralai(throws random flowers at Dona)

Dona(runs away, squirrel still humping her)

Everyone: YAY!

Rikku: Phew…

Gippal: What? My hair isn't evil…?!

Baralai: w00t! We won!

Yuna: My gawd that was horrid!

Nooj: Ahm hungert!

Paine: Rikku, Gippal and Yuna, you go make breakfast!

Mentioned ppl: Yessir!(go make breakfast)

People who were asleep(are no longer asleep)

Narrator: It's 11.59 and Rikku, Gippal and Yuna are attempting to make breakfast.

Gippal: I can so cook!(gets pan and flour, flour explodes on them, pan drops on Rikku)

Rikku: Owies! ;_; I hate you now!

Yuna: -_-

Gippal: Pffftt…(spits out flour) Ew, it's so picky!(adds eggs)

Yuna: Honestly Gippal, that stuff looks like…shoopuf shit…

Rikku: Yup-yup!

Gippal: Hmph. You're just jealous 'cause you can't cook for your lives!

Rikku: @_@ Seriously, I can cook better

Gippal: Well, prove it!

Rikku: You're so on, baby!

Narrator: It's 12.15 and Leblanc, Baralai, Buddy and Brother are in the garden. Paine and Nooj are playing poker in the lounge area.

Leblanc: Seriously, loves… This garden is so much worse than mine!

Baralai:… Let's NOT go there…

Buddy(gets garden scissors): Oh yeah!

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Ja jatkoa seuraa =)

Leya
8.6.2004, 11:12:56
Pakko myöntää että minulla oli pirun hauskaa kun luin sinun tekstiäsi. Aluksi tekstiä oli kankeaa lukea, kun käytit paljon noita ^___^ hymiöitä eri muodoissa. Ne toivat kuitenkin hauskan lisän tarinaasi. Välillä aloin naurunpuuskissani ihmettelemään että mitä siellä nyt oikein tehdään kun se sanoo tuota ja tuo sanoo sitä, otetaan nyt pieni esimerkki pätkä tarinasi alkupuolelta:

Rikku(Puts hand on Gippal's shoulder): It's under control.*To Jassu* Jack off, b@st@rd.
Jassu: OUCH!(Dies) X_X![Misha- RANDOMNESS!(Cheers)]
All(Stare): O.o!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jassu: YA!?
Rikku: See?
Gippal: ^__________________*

Tuossa menin hiukan sekaisin. Mitä se Rikku oikein teki Jassulle? *utelias*
Kaikkein hauskinta oli kun liitit tarinaan mukaan Rikkun ja Gippalin suhteen. Pelissähän he olivat jo eronneet, mutta versiosi heidän suhteestaan tässä on tosi hauska Siitä paljon plussaa. Toinen kohta joka minun on aivan pakko laitaa tähän on:
Lulu(Is proud of her 'milkshakes')
Vidina: Gawgle!*Burps*
YLP: AWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vidina: o_o'
YLP: AWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vidina(Decides it's time to run away)
YLP(Grab him): AWWW!!!!!!!!!! Ya worthless piece of shit! DIE!(Throw Vidina into teh trippy ocean o.o')
Vidina: GAWGLE!(Drowns)
YLP: AWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(Jump on his corpse)
Onko YLP Yuna, Lulu ja Paine? Mitä Vidinalle oikein tapahtui, jäi epäselväksi.
Kirjoitus virheistä en nyt mitään ala sanomaan, kun kirjoittamasi teksti on slangia, siitäkin siis saat plussaa, sillä tykkään lukea enemmän englannin kielistä slangia kuin sitä kirjakieltä. Kritiikkini nyt on hiukan kankea, mutta toivottavasti sait selvää. Syynä on kauhea kiire, mutta minun oli aivan pakko saada kehua ja kritisoida tekstiäsi. Tarinasi on hauska, siitä ei ole epäilystä.
Niin, ja laitathan sitä jatkoa nopiasti. Olen kiinnostunut kuulemaan lisää. ^^

The Real Rikku
8.6.2004, 15:33:43
Pakko myöntää että minulla oli pirun hauskaa kun luin sinun tekstiäsi. Aluksi tekstiä oli kankeaa lukea, kun käytit paljon noita ^___^ hymiöitä eri muodoissa. Ne toivat kuitenkin hauskan lisän tarinaasi. Välillä aloin naurunpuuskissani ihmettelemään että mitä siellä nyt oikein tehdään kun se sanoo tuota ja tuo sanoo sitä, otetaan nyt pieni esimerkki pätkä tarinasi alkupuolelta:

Tuossa menin hiukan sekaisin. Mitä se Rikku oikein teki Jassulle? *utelias*
Kaikkein hauskinta oli kun liitit tarinaan mukaan Rikkun ja Gippalin suhteen. Pelissähän he olivat jo eronneet, mutta versiosi heidän suhteestaan tässä on tosi hauska Siitä paljon plussaa. Toinen kohta joka minun on aivan pakko laitaa tähän on: Onko YLP Yuna, Lulu ja Paine? Mitä Vidinalle oikein tapahtui, jäi epäselväksi.
Kirjoitus virheistä en nyt mitään ala sanomaan, kun kirjoittamasi teksti on slangia, siitäkin siis saat plussaa, sillä tykkään lukea enemmän englannin kielistä slangia kuin sitä kirjakieltä. Kritiikkini nyt on hiukan kankea, mutta toivottavasti sait selvää. Syynä on kauhea kiire, mutta minun oli aivan pakko saada kehua ja kritisoida tekstiäsi. Tarinasi on hauska, siitä ei ole epäilystä.
Niin, ja laitathan sitä jatkoa nopiasti. Olen kiinnostunut kuulemaan lisää. ^^

Jee! Edes joku vaivautui arvostelemaan! :D Kiitos!

No, se Jassu kuoli. Se kuoli ihan vaan siks, tämä tarina on vähän random. Siinä oli random kuolema. =)

Rikku ja Gippal sopii yhteen hyvin. Siks mi laitoin niitten suhteen tähän tarinaan

Vidina... No, se kai hukkui sitten, mereenhän se heitettiin... Se kyllä herää henkiin ja kuolee vähän väliä... Ei kuitenkaan kokoajan...

Lisää tulee kunhan mi jaksan kirjoittaa... Jatkan varmaan tänään... :huh:

The Real Rikku
6.7.2004, 12:21:08
:eh: Juup. Tässä olis vähän muunneltu(Lue: Todella paljon muokattu) versio tarinasta Jotain hyvin erilaista... Yesh, ja jatkoin sitä~

The most weirdest Big Brother story of all time!(Tjsp. Eikä Rikkun veli)

Misha:*Snorts* Yeah, dude! I totally was sugar-high! Oh yeah. Who's good? Misha is.*Hiccup* I'm drunk off my ass… NOT REALLY, JES' HIGH OFFA SUGAR~~!!!! Vidina and Tidus bashing, with slight Wakka and Auron bashy-bashy too! Oh, and random deaths!

Pairings:
YuTi
RikkuGippal
PaineNooj
LeblancBaralai
OrLo(O_O')
WaLu
KimahriShoopuf
AuronSomeone
There ya have it!

~:~:~:~Chapter 1: Phear teh trippy ficcy!~:~:~:~

ScEnE: Besaid beach
Cast: FFX-2

Tidus:*Grins* I'm a blitzer!
Wakka: Me too, ya?
Aurochs: We too, ya?
Rikku: Seriously, I'm too!(Jumps up and down)
Gippal: Why did you sign me up for blitzball, Rikku?
Rikku:*Whispers to Gippal* 'Coz you look so damn cute in your blitz-uniform.
Gippal:*Blushes* (Turns away)
Tidus: AUROOOOCHS! PRACTISE!!!!! NOOOOOOW!!!!!!!!!!
Aurochs: YESSIR MA'AM SIR!(Snicker) Meg!
Tidus: -_-'
Yuna:*To Paine and Lulu* So Rikku's joined the Aurochs with Gippal?
Lulu: Yeah. I heard Wakka talked her into it.
Paine: I heard she and Gippal signed themselves freely in it…
Yuna:~sigh~I've always wanted to blitz… But now I'm pregnant… To a guy who just watches Lulu's pair of milkshakes!
Lulu(Is proud of her 'milkshakes')
Vidina: Gawgle!*Burps*
YuLuPa: AWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vidina: o_o'
YLP: AWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vidina(Decides it's time to run away)
YLP(Grab him): AWWW!!!!!!!!!! Ya worthless piece of shit! DIE!(Throw Vidina into teh trippy ocean o.o')
Vidina: GAWGLE!(Drowns)
YLP: AWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(Jump on his corpse)

TEH TRIPPY BLITZ PRACTISE!

Tidus: NAMECALL! Rikku?
Rikku: HERE!
Tidus: Gippal?
Gippal: Unfortunately…
Tidus: Wakka, Letty, Jassu, Botta, Keepa?
Mentioned ppl: PRESENT, YA?
Tidus: MOVE CHECK! Rikku; Corkscrew Shot?
Rikku(Performs a succesful Corkscrew Shot)
Tidus: Gippal; Invicible shot?
Gippal(Performs Invicible shot)
Tidus: I pity the trippy foo'!
All: O_o;
Wakka(After a minute of silence): Ya…
Rikku: DULL! Can we, like, start?
Jassu(Tries his 'move' on Rikku): So… Wanna get busy under the fire?
Gippal(Tries to push Jassu away): Hey hey hey! Stupid blitzer, step away from lady Skylar.
Rikku(Puts hand on Gippal's shoulder): It's under control.*To Jassu* Jack off, b@st@rd.
Jassu: OUCH!(Dies) X_X![Misha- RANDOMNESS!(Cheers)]
All(Stare): O.o!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jassu: YA!?
Rikku: See?
Gippal: ^__________________*
Tidus: AWRIGHT! Let's put uniform's on!

Instead of teh trippyish uglish yellowish weirdish uniform's, they've got black and blue uniform's.

Gippal: Man, Rikku, oui yna rud!
Rikku: Same to you, hot stuff!*Winks*
Tidus: Sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooo… You got the hots for Rikku?
Gippal: You know I have.
Wakka: Want some 'love tips'?*Wink wink wink wink wink wink, wiggle wiggle*
Gippal: Nope. She'll do fine~.
Tidus: Well, we'll be here for ya, buddy.
Buddy(Appears): WUT? Want @$$?
Tidus: AHH! SEXUALLY MAD GAY MAN!
Then suddenly… BANG! And Buddy was no longer in the book of the living…
Gippal: Rikku Rikku Rikku… How many times've I told you NOT to play with LOADED machina guns before?(Pats Rikku's head)
Rikku(Holds a giant machina gun in her hands and grins): Sorry, daddy.
Gippal:*Whispers to her* Good girl. I'll give you a cookie later.
Tidus: Ah, the young L-O-V-E~~!
Wakka*Sighs girly*
Aurochs(Sing a cheesy love song)
Rikku: Hey, c'mon. We're not serious. We're friends, right Gippal?
Gippal: Oh yeah. Very good friends indeed.(Slaps Rikku's butt)
Rikku(Slaps Gippal): Whoops… Sorry, reflex.
Tidus: OY! OY! OY! O-Y!
Aurochs: WHAT?
Tidus(Farts)
Aurochs: EW!(Faint)

DA TRIPPY PRACTISE STARTS!

Tidus: Throw ball! Kick ball! Eat ball! Boss ball! Sit on ball! Uhh… Molest Ball…!
Rikku: HEY, YOU ARSE!
Tidus: PICK YER PARTNER AND PRACTISE!
Rikku: Gippy!!!!!!!!(Extends her hands)
Gippal: Cid's girl!!!!!!!(Extends his hands)
RG: WE'RE A PAIR!(Hug)
Wakka*Sighs girly*
Aurochs(Sing a cheesy love song)
Tidus: I PICK… LULU'S TITS!
Lulu: WTF?!
Wakka: WTF, YA!?*Sighs manly*
Aurochs(Sing a cheesy war theme)
Tidus: LET'S STARTS!
Clock(Rings)
Rikku: Aw… Our practise time's over already???????????????

~:~:~:~Chapter 2: TEH TRIPPY PICNIC!~:~:~:~

Yuna: FUG!
All:*GAASSSSSSSPPPPPPPP* Yuna!
Yuna: THE FUG?
Rikku: C'moooooooooooooooon, arses! Let's EAT!
Gippal(Puts his arm around Rikku's shoulder's)
Rikku(Grins)
YLP: AWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!(Kill Vidina by hanging him from a tree[Not Nooj!])
Rikku: Okay, let's avoid them…
Gippal:*Whispers to Rikku* Wanna get outta here?
Rikku:*Whispers back* You betcha!
R&G(Sneak away)
Yuna: Vidina's a damn mo'fo!
Lulu: Duh Ms. Obvious!
Paine: Hey nonny-nonny!(Cartwheels sluggishly and crashes into tree[Not Nooj])
Buddy: That had to hurt… o_o'
Paine:*Twitch* I want mah ciggies…*Twitch*
Maester Mika[Misha- Is there for no reason, I'm gonna kill 'im!]: Pwaize bee to Yevhon!(Sluggishly does gesture) (Tree[Not Nooj!] falls on him) (Dies)
Nooj(Gets pecked by nightingales): Ekk!
Vidina(Magically revives, only to be killed again)
YLP: AAAAAAAWWWWWW!!!!(Kill Vidina by burying him alive[Talk about scary])
Leblanc:*Hic* Ya know, loves…*Hic*
Baralai(Looks at her in disgust)
Paine(Starts snapping chickens necks[chickens…?])
Yuna: Paine, you shit for brains! We looks after the chickens, we do not kill them!
Paine: But…chickens make funny snap sounds!
Yuna(Backslaps)
Paine(Nudges)
Yuna(Left hooks)
Paine(Right straights)
Nooj(Is being pecked by… weasels…[we live in a weird world*Poses*])
Rikku(Returns): Wootness!
Suddenly, there is an evil earthquake that I caused(MWAHAHA!) and tears the place where they are off the mainland!
Gippal: Fuck, this blows!
Rikku: We're stranded!(Runs around) Ahh! Noooo! My pixie stix…(Wails)
They all, being stupid and not running back home whilst they could, are now stranded on an island!
Leblanc(Looks up): Duh Ms. Obvious!

@~;~~@~;~~@~;~~@~;~~@~;~~@~;~~

So they(Rikku, Gip, Yuna, Paine, Dona, Leblanc, Nooj, Logos, Ormi, Baralai, Buddy, Brother, Lulu, Wakka, Vidina and Tobli. The others died…) are stranded on an isle with random killer chickens! But alas, like a miracle they find a strangely modern house(Big Bro hits!) and decide to live in it! To survive there, they recieve tasks and every two weeks one person is voted off the place and forced to get killed by the chickens!*Inhale* WILL they survive? WILL they get eaten by the chickens? WILL they know that there's a 900 000 gil reward? Check the following cred out if you want to find out!(Cred-> Shit)

Oh, yeah. Their nicknames:

Rikku= Cid's (little) girl
Gippal= The Gip or The Hawtness
Yuna= Yunie
Paine= Nonny-nonny or Goth bitch
Dona= HelpmeI'mignored!
Leblanc= Ms. Tit For Brains
Nooj= Treeman or just Tree
Logos= Twig
Ormi= Fatso or Sweaty Fat Fuck
Baralai= Barry or Lidea(Cutie)
Buddy= Friendly Neighbourhood Buddy or FNB for short
Brother= Incesting prick
Lulu= Loo-Roll or just Ms. Huge Rack
Wakka= Wanker or Dude With Weird Hair-do
Tobli= Obnoxious midget or just Stupid Tobli ^___^

Sorry to Leblanc, the writer! I'm a rip off! I ripped somethings off that were in your story! Don't sue me~!

Oh, and in case ya didn't know… I am… Sephiroth's mother… Naw, I'm Big Brother…(AN: It's weird, me being female and all O_o') If that solves the mystery of me treating Gippal, Rikku, Leblanc and Baralai differently…

Day 1: Nominations and plain weirdness

Narrator: It's been half an hour since the cast got stranded and found the house and they all[exept Buddy] are drunk.

Rikku: Hey yeah-yeah-yeah…*hic*

Tobli: (talking to wall) Sho I shaysh*hic* "You gotsh to find the pepper, yup-yup. Pepper ish vital, no-one existsh without it".

Wall: (inanimate object)

Gippal: It's so W-E-I-R-D that*hic, vomit* there's an H-O-U-S-E in the M-I-D-D-L-E of an S-T-R-A-N-D-E-D island…*hic, vomit*

Big Brother: And now for the first nominations. Will Yuna get her chicken ass into the diary room?

Brother: Moose moose!*hic* Yuna is a moose!

Baralai: No moose!*vomit* (sips lager)

Brother: No moose? Aaaaww… ;_;

Yuna: (sluggishly walks to the diary room) Hewwo Big Bwothew!

Big Brother: Er, hello^___^ Yuna, who will you nominate?

Yuna: I nominate…*hic* Dona, 'cause she's just so freaking lesbian. And also… Brother. He said that I'm a-a MOOSE!(hysterical sob)

Bir Bro: Okay. (boots her out of the room)

Rikku(running around wildly): UWAOO~!

Gippal(tackles her)

Baralai(throws beer can)*hic*

Big Bro: Will (dodges beer can) will Lulu come to the diary room?

Lulu(goes, taking lager with her) *hic, vomits on the camera*

Big Bro: Hello Lulu. Who will you nominate?

Lulu: I nominate… Rikku, 'cause she's always flirting with Wakka!

Big Bro: I think she's not…

Lulu(looks out, sees Rikku getting tickled by Gippal): Whoops, er…my bad…

Big Bro: Anyone else you want to nominate?

Lulu: I nominate… Paine, she's a damn dominatrix bitch!(leaves, kicks wall)

Big Bro: Will Brother get his mambo arse into the diary room?

Brother(skips to diary room, destroying two lamps, knocking off a pan, making an earthquake in Zanarkand, sending five nuclear bombs off and killing wild squatter monkeys while doing so)[yes, as said; Mambo arse!]

Big Bro: Brother, nominate two people.

Brother: I nominate all the lusting males because they're after Yuuunnnaaa!

Big Bro: Don't you shit for brains get it that she's your cousin?!

Brother: Cou-sin? Sin? YUNA IS SIN?! AWW!!! ;_;(gets thrown out)

Rikku(kicks)

Gippal(is sent flying to the sofa)

Rikku(attacks him)

Gippal(tickles Rikku)

Rikku: Hehehehehehe! Nooooooo*hic* NO STOP!(laughs drunkenly)

Dona(gets in bitch slap war with Yuna)

Big Bro: Rikku to the diary room!

Rikku(dances drunkenly to the diary room, poses for while)*vomit*

Big Bro: Who will you nominate?

Rikku: Uhh… Gippal, 'cuz of his eye patch, it pisses me off! It's in yer face! And Brother for being a short sighted prick who tries to tickle me to hand over naked Yuna pics but hey, he's a damn asshole and he ain't gettin' better!(leaves, falls on floor and crawls to Gippal)

Baralai: Moose moose!*hic* Diary moose!

Brother: Asshole!(hits him) There ain't no mooses!*hic, vomit*

Baralai: Awwies!*hic* (sips lager)

Big Bro: Will Dona drag her large mambo ass into the diary room?

Dona(drunkenly walks to the diary room): Hewwo!

Big Bro: Who will you nominate?

Dona:*hic* Gee…*vomit* I nominate Rikku because bikinis and scarves do NOT match! They don't I tell you!*vomit* And Yuna for being an mother ****er! (leaves dancing)

Yuna: Hairl gel! ;_;

Paine: I want mah precioussssss hair gel-o!(reaches out) My own… Mah fucking preciousssssss…(dribble)

Nooj(runs in with a rabid squirrel humping his ear)

Everyone(stares): O_O

Gippal(glares): Idiot!*hic*

Big Bro: Will Gippal get his sexy existence into the diary room?

Gippal(drunkenly walks/crawls into the diary room)

Big Bro: Who will you nominate?

Gippal: I nominate…*hic, vomit* Rikku, 'cause she's too hawt!*drool* And I nominate Brother for being a prick!(drunkenly runs out and hits wall)

Yuna: Moose Brother!(hits him with pillow)

Brother: Mah momma!*hic, vomit*

Big Bro: PAINE TO THE DIARY ROOM!

Paine(cartwheels into diary room)*hic*

Big Bro(sweet tone): Hewwo Paine.

Paine: Hewwo Big Bwudda!

Big Bro(still sweet tone): Paine?

Paine: Yef Big Bwothew?

Big Bro: Nominate two people!

Paine: I nominate Brother! Would you lust after your cousin?! So sick! Ewwiness!
And I nominate Ormi for being fat!(cartwheels out, runs over Logos)

Rikku: Mooses are EVIL! Evil I say!(raises fist)*vomits*

Everyone: O_o;

Big Bro: Leblanc to the diary room!

Leblanc(takes beer with her)

Big Bro: Hi Leblanc

Leblanc: Hello love

Big Bro: (giggles) She called me love!^_^ Who will you nominate?

Leblanc: I nominate… Brother! He's an incesting prick! And I'd also want to nominate Twig! I mean… Legos? Lobos? Pogos? Fukofs? It'll come to me soon…(leaves)*hic, vomit*

Nooj(has gotten rid of the squirrel)

Twig…er, Logos: Nooj is a tree!*hic, vomit*

Buddy: O_O Jeez!(mops up sick)

Big Bro: Noojster to the diary room!

Nooj(goes)

Big Bro: Hiya Noojie! Who will you shit for brains nominate?

Nooj: I nominate Brother! And Rikku! The Al Bheds must go!(leaves)

Lulu: WAS MY MOM PREGNANT BEFORE SHE GOT ME!?

Nooj: I'm a goody goody and I'm goin' to bed!(goes)

Gippal: WITH WHOOOOOOOO?

Big Bro: Will Twig…er, Logos get to the diary room, please?

Logos(slurs something, walks to diary room)

Big Bro: Hiya ass! Nominate two people

Logos: I NOMINATES EVERY MALE!*hic, vomit*(slurs, walks out)

Leblanc: Mooses! Eekk!*vomit*(slurs words)

Brother: And I says, "Gullwings!"(hops on table and makes flapping moves)

Rikku: After I declare mooses evil, you shan't go NEAR them!

Everyone(looks at a moose on the yard)

Moose: Moo[Or whatever mooses say]

Everyone: O_o'(back away)

Gippal(drunkenly): #Go fetch me a bottle of rum! Hey ho hey ho…#

Rikku: There's a giant moose oooooon the premises…kill it O_o Kill it for the sake of poor people it's eaten!(chases it with random twig)

Big Bro: Ormi to the diary room! Ormi to the diary room! Ormi to the diary room! Ormi to the diary room!

Ormi(goes into the diary room)

Big Bro: Who will you nominate?

Ormi: I nominates… Nooj the Tree! Trees are evil!*hic, vomit* And also… Yuna! No, wait… Paine!(leaves and does a dance)

Lulu(hangs Vidina) (whistles innocently and blames Yuna) (sings): # 'Twas Yuunnaa~#

Dona: Flap damn you!(kicks)

Chicken(fears her and thus, flaps): >_>

Everyone: (tunelessly singing) #Don't blame…it on de sunshiiiiiine… Don't blame…it on de good tiiiimes…#

Tobli: *hic*#Blame it on Tree!#*hic, vomit*

Nooj(pissed out): I AIN'T NO TREE! *_*

Yuna:*hic, vomit* Sure ya are! Ya're teh biggest Twee awive!

Rikku: w00t!

Dona(is ignored)

Big Bro: Baralai will you drag your cuteness in here?

Baralai(slurs, goes into diary room)

Gippal(throws beer can at him): Bitching kinky ass!*vomits*

Baralai(is hit): Owies… ;_;

Big Bro: Who will you nominate?

Baralai: I nominate… Lulu and Wakka!(leaves, falls on floor)

Paine: Nonny?(cartwheels over poor Baralai) Funnay!(does same 45 times)

Baralai(is like pancake)

Gippal: Yeah, I know I'm sexy… ~_~(slurs)

Rikku: O_o Yepperdoodles!

Yuna and Lulu(drown Vidina in the toilet and flush it): >XD

Paine: Don't hog all teh fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuun…!

Big Bro: Will Buddy come to the diary room?

Buddy(goes)

Big Bro: Hi Buddy. You know, I've been looking at the behavior of the lot of you and I've seen that you've been acting…nicely

Buddy: ^___^ Thanks. My mama will be proud!

Big Bro: Well, anyhoo…nominate two of the people

Buddy: Gee… I think I'll nominate… Leblanc, her dress is just too revealing! And then I'll nominate… Tobli for no apparent reason(leaves)

Rikku(falls on floor, slurs words)

Gippal(sleeptalks): Hey, soft hiney… We are so…planting…shoopuf shit on…Baralai's house…eh, eh?*vomits* You're looking so hawt…!(reaches out)

Leblanc: O_o! You twat!(slaps him) Don't grope my hiney!*hic*

Yuna: #Oh baby baby… Why'd ya leave me…?#(slurs)

Logos: Good God! An empty beer can! Preposterous!

Ormi: I'm tweakin' outs!(drinks beer) Yay! I am so gay!

Leblanc*hic*

Yuna: #I am sooooooo*hic* haaaaaaaaaaawt…#

Brother: YUNA!(reaches out)

Yuna: O_o Umm…(runs for dear life)

Brother: Yuuuuunnnnnaaaaa~! Mah Yuna~!

Everyone: Shit for brains Brother, she's your C-O-U-S-I-N!

Brother:… Me no geddit…(chases after Yuna)

Nooj: Alas, 'tis hopeless!

Paine(empty stare): You moron(throws can at him)

Nooj(is hit by can): ;_;

Yuna and Brother run past them.

Yuna: Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeelp!!!! Pweez?

Brother: Yuuunnnaaa~!(drools)

Gippal(slurs words, reaches out)

Rikku: Eek!(backslaps him) No groping! O_o

Big Bro: Will, uh… Will Wanker-Wakka come to the diary room?

Wakka(slurring, goes to the room)

Big Bro: Hello Wakka…

Wakka*vomits*: Hi, ya?

Big Bro: Who will…you…nominate…?

Wakka: I nominate… Gippal…because of…his hair…*hic* It's EVIL! Evil I tell ya!

Big Bro: So? His hair happens to be very sexy

Wakka: And…(slurs words)… Nooj…(leaves/crawls)

Lulu: Kaimkaze nazis!*hic*(hallucinates Wakka naked)

Paine: w00tness… Rmwahahahahaha!

Yuna and Brother run past again

Dona: Everybody! Hmph! Ignores ME!

Rikku: #Blame Yunieee…*hic* Blame the Treeeeeee…*vomits* Blaaaaaaaaame…meeeee…# (slurs)

Yuna(jumps on Buddy): Protect me!

Brother: Hmph. The fags get the chicks!

Big Bro: Tobli to the diary room?

Tobli: Yepper yesh, I gotsh to go!*hic* C-c-c-c-cheerios!(runs)

Big Bro: Hello stupid Tobli. Who will you nominate?

Tobli: I nominatesh…*vomits on camera* Gippal. Hish hair ish enough to get me jealoush! Yepper yesh yesh! And I nominate… Lulu becaushe she hash a big rack! Yeppidy yep-yep!(slurs words, is poked with random twig)

Rikku(poking people with random twigs)

Yuna: Brother! You incest! I hate yoo!*hic, vomit*

Buddy: Another job for me!(mops up sick)

Leblanc: Lager is soooo…*hic* Addictive…(maniacal giggle)

Dona(goes off to sleep)

*In the middle of night when everyone's sleepin peacefully…*

Leblanc(yells): IT WAS LOGOS![remember when she didn't remember Logos' name in the Diary room?]

Others(universal groan): -_-'

Leblanc: o^__^o SORRY LOVES!

~~~~~:::::~~~~~

And that ends day one! They all went to their beds and sleeped through the night.


Chapter two: Garden caramba!


Narrator: It is morning in the Big Bro house. Rikku, Gippal, Yuna, Paine, Baralai and Nooj are awake, discussing non-vital stuff in the living room.

:::: 11.47 a.m ::::

Rikku(in yellow tops and loose white pants for jammies): But seriously…

Gippal(in loose T-shirt and shorts): So what? I've hangover, don't pressure me!

Baralai(in white T-shirt and boxers)(holds head): Oh…I am never, ever drinking again…

Yuna(in pink pyjamas): I'm so tired…

Paine(in black tops and blue shorts for jammies): Nonny…?

Nooj(in red pyjamas that have pink hearts): I'm hungry…

Rikku: I think we should eat cheese!

Gippal:*gasp* NO! Not CHEESE!

Yuna: Cheezy balls… Mmm…

Paine: Nooj why do you have something white in your hair?

Nooj: That damn squirrel raped me when I was sleeping! No!

Everyone: O_o

Nooj: What? It's not like I could control the forces of nature!

Everyone(back away)

Nooj: ;_; I feel ignored…

Leblanc(in red nightie): What's with the noise loves? People have hangover! They wanna sleep!

Dona(in slutty black nightie): IGNORANCE IS BLISS!

Everyone: O_O

Dona: What? It is

Rikku: It wasn't THAT…

Gippal(points at Dona)

Baralai(hysterical laughter. And I fucking mean hysterical!)

Yuna: Good GOD!

Paine: N-nonny!?

Nooj: Bwhahahahahaha!

Dona: What? O_o

Rikku: A squirrel is humping Dona's ear! AHH!

Gippal(screams)

Brother(runs past in loin-cloth, screaming like a girl)

Rikku: Fuck off Dona! We do not want to be humped by animals!(raises random twig)

Yuna(squeals): Eee…someone, help us…

Rikku(hits Dona with twig)

Dona: X_x

Gippal: w00t!

Buddy: SHUT THE HELL UP!

Wakka: I HAVE HANGOVER, YA?! LEMME SLEEP!

Baralai: Random twigs attack!

Twigs(hit Dona): O_o

Dona: Owies! ;_;

Gippal(hits Dona with pillow)

Rikku: Mwhahahahahahaha! Twillow power!(high fives Baralai and Gippal)

Baralai(throws random flowers at Dona)

Dona(runs away, squirrel still humping her)

Everyone: YAY!

Rikku: Phew…

Gippal: What? My hair isn't evil…?!

Baralai: w00t! We won!

Yuna: My gawd that was horrid!

Nooj: Ahm hungert!

Paine: Rikku, Gippal and Yuna, you go make breakfast!

Mentioned ppl: Yessir!(go make breakfast)

People who were asleep(are no longer asleep)

Narrator: It's 11.59 and Rikku, Gippal and Yuna are attempting to make breakfast.

Gippal: I can so cook!(gets pan and flour, flour explodes on them, pan drops on Rikku)

Rikku: Owies! ;_; I hate you now!

Yuna: -_-

Gippal: Pffftt…(spits out flour) Ew, it's so picky!(adds eggs)

Yuna: Honestly Gippal, that stuff looks like…shoopuf shit…

Rikku: Yup-yup!

Gippal: Hmph. You're just jealous 'cause you can't cook for your lives!

Rikku: @_@ Seriously, I can cook better

Gippal: Well, prove it!

Rikku: You're so on, baby!

Narrator: It's 12.15 and Leblanc, Baralai, Buddy and Brother are in the garden. Paine and Nooj are playing poker in the lounge area.

Leblanc: Seriously, loves… This garden is so much worse than mine!

Baralai:… Let's NOT go there…

Buddy(gets garden scissors): Oh yeah! Baby, these are top quality!

Others: O_o'

Baralai: Okay, Buddy. Let's take them away…

Buddy: NO! They're mine! My own… Mah preciousss…(dribble)

Leblanc: O_o' Right… Ooh!(tugs plant) Naughty orange plant!

Baralai: Ick!

Leblanc: Friggin' plants!(tugs)

Buddy: Buddy to the rescue!(cuts plants) >;O)

Leblanc: Nooo-hooo! Plants are mah life! ;_;

[Shifts to kitchen. Rikku and Gippal are having their cooking competiton as Yuna judges]

Yuna: Gippal, don't smear flour on Rikku!

Gippal: She started it!

Rikku: Didn't!

Gippal: Did!

Rikku: Didn't!

Gippal: Did did did diiiiid!(smears flour on Rikku)

Rikku: You idiot!(pours egg in Gippal's hair)

Gippal: No! My hair! Don't touch the hair! … Too late! ~_~

Yuna: MINUS TEN POINTS EACH!

RG: Noooooo!;_;

[Shifts to lounge area. Paine and Nooj are playing poker.]

Paine: BABY! I win!

Nooj: Not fair. You cheater! How dare you!

Paine:*gasp* How dare you!

Nooj: No, how dare you how dare my how dare you!?

Paine: Brain… Hurts… X.X'[twitch]

Nooj: So I win! Mwhahahahaha!(dances out)

Paine(looks at Nooj's cards): He lost! Oh, he's not getting away with this, that chicken shit tree man!(chases after Nooj)

[Shifts to pool. Brother, Logos, Ormi and Dona are swimming there while Lulu and Wakka sit near the pool.]

Wakka: Ya…

Lulu: Shut up…

Rikku(throws dough out of window): Say goodbye to victory, Gippal!

Gippal: Nooo! My dough!

Dough(falls on Ormi's head)

Yuna: Rikku! Minus fifteen points!

Rikku: ~_~ Figures…

Logos(pokes the dough): Good God!

Ormi(eats dough): Yum!

Dona(is still being ignored)

Brother: Yuunnaa!

Yuna: O_o'

Dona(kicks him)

Yuna(gives the thumbs up)

Dona: They don't ignore me anymore!

Others(ignore): >>;

Brother: Yuunnaa, wiill yoouu maarryy mee?

Yuna: Noo!

Brother: Maakkeess mee saadd…

Buddy: No! You shall never get mah garden scissors! They're mine, my own, mah preciousssssssss…(twitch)

Leblanc: But Buddeh! We need them, love!

Baralai: Ahh! Killer bush!

Tobli: Yesh yesh…

Wakka(throws Blitzball at Tobli, thus making him fall flat on his face)

Lulu: Wakka, we have no weapons here…

Wakka: Ya…

Lulu: Shut up…

Gippal(kicks Ormi): You sweaty fat fuck! That was my key to victoreh!

Ormi: Sweaty and fuck, but don't say fat…

Logos: Good lord!(jumps into pool)

Nooj: I am the poker master!

Paine(inches closer to Nooj from behind with hose): >>;

Nooj: Huh?(turns)

Paine: DIE!(hoses Nooj with water)

Nooj: Aww, no!(runs, Paine follows)

Rikku(rolls on grass laughing): Teh Gip lost! Bwahahahaha!

Yuna: Um, Rikku… Sorry to say this but you had a draw…

Rikku: WHAT!?

Buddy(runs with garden scissors, Leblanc and Barry follow): NO!

Leblanc: Yes! Love, tackle him!

Gippal: Baralai can't, he's too girly!

Baralai: Hey! I'll show you AND your gay clothes…(tackles Buddy)

Buddy(impales two chickens on the scissors)

Big Bro: Buddy to the diary room!

Buddy: Oops…(goes into diary room)

Rikku: Buddy's in twubble…

Yuna: That he is…

[Shifts to Diary Room. Big Brother and Buddy are talking.]

Big Bro(sweet as pie tone): Hello Buddy

Buddy: Hello Big Bro

Big Bro(sweet tone): Buddy?

Buddy: Yes?

Big Bro(sweet tone changes into angry vicious tone): LISTEN YOU SHIT FOR BRAINS! THE HOUSEMATES LOOK AFTER THE CHICKENS! WE LOOK AFTER THE CHICKENS! And what does Buddy go and do!?

Buddy: Impale them ^_^

Big Bro: Yes, you shit for brains! Just thank your mama that you'll get away with a warning!

Buddy: Thank thee, mama!(leaves)

Narrator: It's been three hours since Buddy went to the diary room and got his warning. If he kills any more chickens, he will be eliminated. The contestants are all in the lounging area, talking about things. It's 15.23 and it's raining.

Rikku: Why does it have to rain?

Paine: I dunno…(looks at Nooj) IDIOT!

Nooj: Hey!(chickens peck him)

Gippal: Baralai is girleh!

Baralai: Gippal is gayeh!

Gippal: Hey, I resent that!

Lulu(throws cushion at them)

Leblanc(from kitchen): The food's ready, loves!

Others: Yay!(go eat)

Rikku(poking food): What's this?

Leblanc: Fish fingers!

Yuna:… They look like fish barf…

Paine: Good God, this can't be edible!

Nooj(still pecked): Shoo!(drops the chickens fish fingers)

Chickens: Caaw!(flap away)

Tobli: Yesh yesh…(puts five pounds of pepper on the fish fingers) ;O)

Baralai: Weird…(eats the food) … My God… O_O

Logos: GOOD GAWD, THIS SHIT SUCKS!

Ormi: Shh!

Leblanc: ;_;

Baralai: May I be excused?

Gippal: Girly man!(throws food at him)

Baralai: Ow, hey!(throws food at him)

Rikku: FOOD WAR!

Others: YEAH!(start food war)

Yuna(sneaks behind Paine with ketchup): >>; (squirts ketchup at Paine)

Paine: Ahh!(squirts mustard at Yuna)

Rikku: Mwahahaha!(throws plates)

Leblanc(is crying): Boohoohoo! ;_;

Big Bro: Will Rikku, Gippal, Baralai and Leblanc come to the diary room? Pronto!

Mentioned ppl(go)

Yuna: They're in trubbabble!

Dona: >>;(squirts ketchup at the remaining ppl)

Big Bro: Dona also

Dona: Shit!(goes)

[Diary room]

Big Bro: You shit for brains! Why did you go and do that?

Rikku: Gippal started!

Baralai: Yeah!

Leblanc: Oh, shut up love. You and One-eye started!

Gippal: I resent that! I've got a name!

Leblanc: Shut up!

Gippal(gives her the finger): >XP

Big Bro: WhatEVER! I don't care who started! Rikku, you broke five plates. Gippal, you and Baralai threw food. Dona, you… I will ignore, leave.

Dona: Whoo-hoo!(leaves)

Big Bro: Leblanc, you can't cook for your life.

Leblanc: Makes me sad… I spent fifteen fucking minutes preparing that food!

Rikku: Food that's not even edible!

Leblanc: Why you little bitch… (strangles Rikku)

Rikku: Remember me as a peacemaker…(dies) (revives) Woop! Auto-Life rox!

Leblanc: Noooo!

Big Bro: YOU ALL GET A WARNING!

All:…

Big Bro: NOW LEAVE, you fucking fucked up ninja turtles in a coma!

All(edge away): O_o'

Narrator: It's been two hours since the food war and warnings happened. It's now 17.25 and the contestants are in the lounge.

Nooj: Why?(chickens still peck him)

Gippal(glares, throws pillow at him): Muffin whore…

Brother(runs out of boy's bedroom…naked O_o)

Rikku: Good LORD, Brother!

Yuna: Ewwww!(covers eyes)

Gippal: For the love of everyone, put some damned clothes on man!

Brother: I am free! Free like the wind!

Paine: Wha- I don't think I wanna know more…

Dona:…(still ignored)

Baralai: That… Is… HIDEOUS! O_O

Ormi: Then whys you staring at him?

Logos: Yesh. Why?

Baralai(blushes): I, um…

Leblanc: Oh… Loves, let him be!

Big Bro: Hello douche bags. Tonight is your first MINI task!

[random PINK envelope appears]

Rikku: Pink… *_*

Yuna: I love pink!

Paine: Fucking NO! My eyes![hiss]

Gippal: [grabs envelope, reads] Dear housemates. Big Brother mini-task number one is a karaoke task. Winners get the "Red Room". You will be split into small groups:

Group I
Breaking the Habit [Linkin Park]
Rikku, Gippal

Rikku: Me and him?!

Gippal: Shuuuut uuuup! There's more:

Group II
Points of Authority [LP ^.^]
Paine, Yuna and Leblanc

Leblanc: Me and amateurs? No way, loves!

Yuna: AMATEURS!? I'm angry!

Paine:……[hisses at envelope]

Gippal: Didn't I tell you to shut your fucking mouths!?

Group III
In the End [LP, for Yevon's sake!]
Baralai, Nooj, Tobli

Nooj: Me and queer boy?

Baralai: Hey, I resent that![throws chicken crap at him]

Nooj: Ick! Ick! Get it offa me! ;_;

Tobli: Yesh yesh…

Gippal: For the last fucking time, shut up!

Group IV
Numb [LP]
Wakka, Lulu

Judges: The rest, Dona, Buddy and Brother. WE HAVE AN HOUR TO GET READY!

Rikku: [gets costumes] There Gip.

Gippal: [in khakis and loose T-shirt, an eye patch with sparkly stuff and some cool shoes] I look SO gay! ;_;

Rikku: [in red dress, hair is done in pigtails that have ribbons, has black boots and red lipstick] Shut up you loon biscuit! [slaps]

Yuna: [in loose shorts and pink shirt] Yay!

Paine: [in black T-shirt and black skirt]……[hisses at Yuna's top]

Leblanc: [in sexy see through vest and a red tutu, hair curled and has pink bow in it] Yay loves! ^_^

Paine:…[hisses at her bow]

Narrator: It's mini-task time! The groups have assembled!

Dona: We have decided that Rikku and Gippal go first!

Rikku: [gets on stage and sings] # Memories consume, like opening the wound, I'm picking me apart again… You all assume I'm safe here in my room, unless I try to start again…#

Gippal: [wails tunelessly] #I don't wanna be the one, the battles always choose. 'Cause inside I realize, that I'm the one confused…#

Both: [tunelessly] "I don't know what's worth fighting for, or why I have to scream! I don't know why I instigate and say what I don't mean! I don't know how I got this way, I know it's not alright. So I'm breaking the habit… Tonight…#

Brother: STOP CUT IT OFF!

[music stops]

Rikku: Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaat?

Brother: Hideous! GROUP TWO!

Gippal: Oui vilgehk mucan!

[Points of Authority blares]

Yuna:[sounds like trout] # Forfeit the game/Before somebody else takes you out of the frame/Puts your name to shame/Cover up your face/You can't run the race/The pace is too fast/You just won't last!#

Leblanc: [pretty voice] #You love the way I look at you/While taking pleasure in the awful things you put me through, love/You take away, if I give in/ My life, my pride is broken, love!#

Paine: [dully] #You love the things I say I'll do/The way I hurt myself again just to get back at you/You take away, if I give in/My life, my pride is broken… HAIR GEL-O!#

All: [now tunelessly] #You like to think you're never wrong/You want to act like you're someone/You want someone to hurt like you/You want to share what you've been through!#

Brother: [wipes off tears] Beautiful, Yuna![throws boxers at her]

Yuna: Umm…Thanks? O_o

Rikku:[sits on sofa, crys] Whyyy-hyyy…? We were good, eh?

Gippal:[hugs her] Yeah. We rocked![curses Brother]

Dona: Group Three!

Nooj: Forget it! I'm not singing!

Baralai: Agh! Do I have to do everything!?

Tobli:[taps bongo] ^_________^

All:……

Nooj: Fuck it all…[gets on stage]

Baralai:[on stage about to open mouth]

Brother: Gross! You won't do!

Tobli:[bongo breaks] ;_;

Baralai: But I never got a single note out!

Nooj: Me neither!

Tobli: My bongos broke, yup-yup! It's a disastrous disaster indeed!

Brother: GROUP FOUR!

Lulu:[gets on stage, sings in purdy voice] #I'm tired--#

Brother: CUT IT OFF!

Lulu: I sung TWO fucking words!

Wakka: I didn't even sing, ya!?

Big Bro: If you're done, will the judges get their mambo asses here?

Judges:[go to Diary Room]

Rikku:… Hey! I noticed that he let only Yuna's group finish!

Gippal: Bloody sexist![shakes fist]

Big Bro: Okay. So what group will win?

Brother: YUNA'S!

Dona: GROUP ONE!

Buddy: GLORY TO AL BHED! GROUP ONE!

Big Bro: O_o' So it's Yuna's group and the Al Bhed's?

Judges: YES!

Big Bro: Okay.[announces] Will group's one and two get in here?

Gippal:[dances] w00t! See you later suckers![grabs Rikku and skips to DR]

Rikku: Ahh![smiles] X)

Yuna: YAY!

Paine: Woot…

Leblanc: Yay loves! ^_______________^

[they all skip to DR and squeeze on chair]

Big Bro: You have been selected to… CLEAN THE FUCKING HOUSE!

All: WHAT!?

Big Bro: Nah, you're selected to go into the… FUCKING BATHROOM!

All: WHAT!?

Big Bro: Nah, you have permission to… DRY HUMP CHICKENS!

All:… WHAT!?

Big Bro:[to self] I could do this forever![to them] Nah, you've gotten permission to go to the reward room!

All:… YAY!

Big Bro: You have time until midnight and no-one can enter nor can anyone exit or else! Mwhahaha!

All: O_o' Umm, thanks?

[boot pops up and kicks them out with the chair]

Narrator: Half an hour ago the winners got the permission to go in the Reward Room, or Red Room. They haven't found it yet…[quietly] Fucking hamsters…

Gippal: Where the hell is that room?

Rikku: Oh, the "Red Room"? We passed it half an hour ago!

Others:…

Yuna: WHY didn't you tell us?

Rikku: I didn't know WHAT room we were looking for!

Gippal: Rikku you're a natural![kisses her cheek]

Rikku:[blush]

All: AAWW…

Rikku: Feckin' shut up…

Narrator: Fifteen minutes later they get to the Red Room.

Yuna:[slowly opens door]

Leblanc:…[butts in] Oh my tits, loves!

Rikku: Wow-ee!

[the room has a dance floor and lots of liquor. It also has some chair and sofas.]

Yuna: Great!

Brother:[puts on Britney Spears]

Gippal:[covers ears] MY HEARING!

Rikku: Brother![pushes him] Sicko![kicks him] >=(

Yuna:[puts on some good music]

[meanwhile, outside…]

Nooj:[listens through door] They're having fun!

Buddy: Duh Mr. Obvious!

Lulu:… Fuckin' genius…

Buddy: Let's play strip poker!

Nooj: NO!

Lulu: What? Got a branch for a wee-wee?

Nooj:[blushes] No you muffin head!

Buddy: Yeah, we don't have enough girls…

Lulu: HEYHEY!

[Reward Room]

Gippal: Hey Cid's girl! Wanna dance?

Yuna:[glugs lager] Ehehehe!

Brother: Yunna, wanna dannce?

Paine:…[hiss]

Rikku: Um, I can't dance?

Gippal: Lame excuse, Cid's little princess![flirty smile and seductive look] You know you wanna dance with Gippal

Rikku: Ah, fine![dances]

Leblanc: WILL YOU DANCE, PAINE!?

Paine: O_O' Fuck no![gets in corner] Hiiss…

Gippal: Woo!

Rikku:[does her flirtiest dance]

Gippal:[blush]

Paine:…[hiss]

Leblanc: ;____________;

Yuna: Ahh! ICKICKIC!

Brother: What's your problem, Yunna?

Gippal:[grabs her waist] ^___________^

Rikku: Groper![slaps and smiles]

~~::::~~

And there goes day two! Mini-tasks are quite common in that house. They can appear approximately five times a day!

In next chapter… Leblanc and Baralai get it on!


Day three: Wednesday; Cabaret madness!

Leya
6.7.2004, 13:40:35
Whee! Jatkoa, vihdoin ja viimein. Tällä kertaa laitan tähän sinun tekemiäsi pieniä virheitä. Tässä on kylläkin vain ne jotka minä tunnistin virheiksi.
Rikku(Performs a succesful Corkscrew Shot) successful

Tidus: Gippal; Invicible shot?
Gippal(Performs Invicible shot) Invisible

Tidus: Sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooo… Tämä on turhan pitkä, Sooo... voisi olla vähän parempi, eikä olisi noin liioittelevaa.
Wakka: Want some 'love tips'?*Wink wink wink wink wink wink, wiggle wiggle* No joo, tässä on ehkä turhan paljon toistoa. *Wink wink* *Wiggle* voisi olla hiukan parempi.
Rikku: C'moooooooooooooooon, arses! Ehkäpä noita o-kirjaimia löytyy hiukan liikaa, C'mooon, saattaisi olla vähemmän liioiteleva.
To survive there, they recieve tasks and every two weeks one person is voted off the place and forced to get killed by the chickens! receive tai received
Check the following cred out if you want to find out!(Cred-> Shit
luulisin että tarkoitit sanaa creed
Nooj= Treeman or just Tree Tree man
I ripped somethings off that were in your story! Don't sue me~! some things tai something's
Poimin tuolta esimerkki kohdan eräästä toistuvasta pikkuvirheestä.
Yuna(Backslaps)
Paine(Nudges)
Yuna(Left hooks)
Paine(Right straights)
Nooj(Is being pecked by… weasels…[we live in a weird world*Poses*])
Rikku(Returns):
Näitä virheitä löytyy pitkin tarinaa, sillä siinä nimen ja sulkumerkin välistä pitäisi löytyä väli, eli:
Yuna (Backslaps)
Paine (Nudges)
Yuna (Left hooks)
jne...
noin se olisi oikein. Nämä ei kyllä paljoa häiritse, mutta ajattelin huomauttaa.
Prkl, nyt annan noiden pikkuvirheiden olla, minulla alkaa niiden kirjoittamisessa väsyä kädet... kuitenkin, niitä löytyy vielä muutama lisää, mutta annan olla, ettei koko kritiikki mene quottamiseksi.

Eli, nyt siirryn plussiin. Tämä stoori on todella hauska, välillä repesin hysteeriseen nauruun. Olet saanut hauskaa tekstiä jälleen aikaan, vaikka tämä olikin "vähän" muunneltu versio aiemmasta. Pakko myöntää, että kaivoin netin syövereistä sanakirjan, että olisin ymmärtänyt joitakin sanoja, mutta se ei paljoa menoa haitannut. Vielä yksi quote...
Brother: Cou-sin? Sin? YUNA IS SIN?! AWW!!! ;_;(gets thrown out) Tämä oli hauska kohta, jolle repesin totaalisesti. Muutenkin nuo kännijutut Big brotherin talossa kutkuttivat nauruhermoja. Hauska, vaikka ehkä hiukan liian pitkä. ^^ Aiotko vielä kirjoittaa tätä? Jos aiot niin suosittelen lämpimästi tarinoiden lyhentämistä. ^^ Vielä sanoisin että sinulla on hauska ja omanlaisesi kirjoitustyyli, jolla kannattaa jatkaa. ^^ Jeh, minä tykkäsin.

Edit//
Jei! Sori niistä virheistä, mi kun kirjoittelen myöhään yöllä jne. niin oon aika väsynyt. ^__^; Ei mitään, ymmärtäähän sen, kun yölllä kirjoittaa silmät ristissä jotakin juttua. ^^

The Real Rikku
6.7.2004, 14:04:34
Jei! Sori niistä virheistä, mi kun kirjoittelen myöhään yöllä jne. niin oon aika väsynyt. ^__^;